Rate my rap lyrics from 1-10?

There all about an 8 or a 9. No real problems in your lyricism. In fact its pretty good. When it comes to structure and how it will all flow together there are some minor flaws. If these were whole verses that you were trying to accomplish then each verses bare minimum should be 14 bars unless your writing something unusually abstract. Your lyrics are perfect for underground rap but not fit for mainstream (which is not a bad thing). If your not good at rapping it out or you just dont want to you might want to think about selling your lyrics or becoming a ghost writer. With your skills you could make good profit.